Comments for The Beautiful Oblivion http://oblivion.wordpress.com Tomorrow's gonna come too soon... Sat, 26 Sep 2009 15:31:16 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on September’s Close by Tatiana http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-33 Tatiana Sat, 26 Sep 2009 15:31:16 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-33 beautiful. beautiful.

]]> Comment on September’s Close by Laura http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-11 Laura Tue, 04 Jul 2006 06:21:39 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-11 Okay, this comment is not a selfish as the previous one. I realsised that I had not commented on your wonderful poem. Well, first things first. If you don't continue writing and posting I'll throw a hatchet at you. Secondly. Hmmmm ... let me think about it. I love the imagery you used. The windows are really nice. The atmosphere is good. I can't really find anything wrong with it. The hands woven shut in sweet tender ... sweet tender WHAT!!!! Yip, that's the only thing that annoyed me. THe rest was brilliant. And believe me, it's not easy to get a compliment to spring forth from my lips ... or in this case, my keyboard. Okay, this comment is not a selfish as the previous one. I realsised that I had not commented on your wonderful poem.

Well, first things first. If you don’t continue writing and posting I’ll throw a hatchet at you.

Secondly. Hmmmm … let me think about it. I love the imagery you used. The windows are really nice. The atmosphere is good. I can’t really find anything wrong with it. The hands woven shut in sweet tender … sweet tender WHAT!!!!

Yip, that’s the only thing that annoyed me. THe rest was brilliant. And believe me, it’s not easy to get a compliment to spring forth from my lips … or in this case, my keyboard.

]]> Comment on September’s Close by Laura http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-10 Laura Tue, 04 Jul 2006 06:13:55 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-10 Hi! Wow, that was a comment I was no expecting. Very interesting idea, I've never tried that. I'll definetely keep it in mind for when I write a poem I actually want to do something with. You see, I write a lot. I HATE writing school assignments. Okay, actually only if they are limited in time. But anyway, I love writing. Any, and I mean ANY, picture that floats into my head, any phrase that I like gets written down and incorporated into a poem or story. Never mind that I only write first chapters of my stories and never get any further ... Okay, that was a nice little ramble. I LOVE the advice, I live off comments on my writing that help me improve. But this peom is, in essence, nothing more than a doodle so I'm not going to spend too much time re-writing it. But I know, I know. Structure and rhythm are my weakest points and I know I should try and make EVERY piece worth while. Hi!

Wow, that was a comment I was no expecting. Very interesting idea, I’ve never tried that. I’ll definetely keep it in mind for when I write a poem I actually want to do something with. You see, I write a lot. I HATE writing school assignments. Okay, actually only if they are limited in time. But anyway, I love writing. Any, and I mean ANY, picture that floats into my head, any phrase that I like gets written down and incorporated into a poem or story. Never mind that I only write first chapters of my stories and never get any further …

Okay, that was a nice little ramble. I LOVE the advice, I live off comments on my writing that help me improve. But this peom is, in essence, nothing more than a doodle so I’m not going to spend too much time re-writing it. But I know, I know. Structure and rhythm are my weakest points and I know I should try and make EVERY piece worth while.

]]> Comment on September’s Close by Rambling Librarian http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-8 Rambling Librarian Fri, 28 Apr 2006 17:03:00 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-8 This was a first poem? Really good. Very musical. I liked the phrase "Shelter of Silence". This was a first poem? Really good. Very musical. I liked the phrase “Shelter of Silence”.

]]> Comment on That Kid by Sandals http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2005/11/15/that-kid/#comment-7 Sandals Sat, 01 Apr 2006 09:12:12 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/?p=4#comment-7 You're the "kid" that I know nothing about....but would like to know more....please visit soon!! You’re the “kid” that I know nothing about….but would like to know more….please visit soon!!

]]> Comment on September’s Close by The Whack!! http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-6 The Whack!! Wed, 29 Mar 2006 20:54:32 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-6 Oh Gareth, oh Gareth...... you are so whacky.... yeah just like me!! Love whacky people that is why I love myself....... Great website - I also want one?? Visit soon, I have something interesting to tell you.... Oh Gareth, oh Gareth…… you are so whacky…. yeah just like me!! Love whacky people that is why I love myself……. Great website – I also want one?? Visit soon, I have something interesting to tell you….

]]> Comment on September’s Close by Lettuce http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-4 Lettuce Fri, 10 Mar 2006 20:13:44 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-4 Yep. Got the 100% mark back today. Was very surprised. :) Yep. Got the 100% mark back today. Was very surprised. :)

]]> Comment on September’s Close by James http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-3 James Fri, 10 Mar 2006 20:01:51 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/27/septembers-close/#comment-3 Is this the same one you got 100% for at school? Is this the same one you got 100% for at school?

]]> Comment on Phone of Doom! by Aquila http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/20/phone-of-doom/#comment-2 Aquila Fri, 24 Feb 2006 12:53:49 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/20/phone-of-doom/#comment-2 I remember getting the one of the first Nokia phones with a camera, the xxxx. Just the fact that you could take pictures (at 640x480) was wow. Then within a month or two everyone had camera phones, some with Mp3 etc. etc. I still maintain that the Nokia's (especially the new ones like yours) take better quality photos than the Sony Ericsson's of the world. PS: I switched to the SE P910i because of the size/camera/mp3/keypad/internet features....Nice phone, camera sucks. Anyhow, point is, that you cannot go wrong with Nokia in my mind - if its for sheer ease of use you're after. I remember getting the one of the first Nokia phones with a camera, the xxxx. Just the fact that you could take pictures (at 640×480) was wow. Then within a month or two everyone had camera phones, some with Mp3 etc. etc.

I still maintain that the Nokia’s (especially the new ones like yours) take better quality photos than the Sony Ericsson’s of the world. PS: I switched to the SE P910i because of the size/camera/mp3/keypad/internet features….Nice phone, camera sucks.

Anyhow, point is, that you cannot go wrong with Nokia in my mind – if its for sheer ease of use you’re after.

]]> Comment on Rendezvous by Aquila http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/06/rendezvous/#comment-1 Aquila Thu, 16 Feb 2006 14:56:54 +0000 http://oblivion.wordpress.com/2006/02/06/rendezvous/#comment-1 Out with the old and in with the new? Looking forward to the occasional cropping up of the past. Out with the old and in with the new? Looking forward to the occasional cropping up of the past.

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